I have attempted s senyru in short - long - short version Dewy eyes shimmer- to shield. She laughed merrily as tears fell from dewy eyes- humour her best shield. Eyes laugh loud washed with salty tears- shine and shield.
I have attempted A Senryu in the short-long- short version. 1:: Fiery rays caress a heart numbed- love blossoms. 2:: Sharp rays golden edged caress softly a heart numbed- fragrant love blossoms. 3:: Rays thaw a heart numb- love flows. Via : Tanka Tuesday
I have done a senyru Sheeped into ways, So rigid,it made men harsh, As freedom weeps. Via: https://ronovanwrites.com/2020/02/10/weekly-haiku-poetry-prompt-challenge-sheep-weep/
An unsung Ode ( a senryu) Beauty in her soul, Her bright spirit a beacon, But still much maligned. Via:https://colleenchesebro.com/2019/11/12/colleens-2019-weekly-tanka-tuesday-poetry-challenge-no-153-synonymsonly/
As your mind goes into vacuity,you are in a beleaguered state. Nothing makes sense as nothing goes in. It seems to have frozen or just gone numb. You go about with the humdrum monotony like a wound up robot. Feeling nothing for there is nothing to feel. Losing nothing for there is nothing to lose.… Continue reading A void( a senryu)