
Yvette Calleiro selected a syllabic form for this week.. Her choice was a form that Gwen Plano created, called the 4-11.
Gwen says the 4-11 is a stanza of eleven lines, four syllables each line. The beginning line also repeats as the last line. Here is Gwenβs example.
Freedom
freedom boundless
an elusive
mirage gleaming
on blistering
dry sandy plains
bewitchingly
beguile,it ties
in shadowy
stifling fetters
of clanging coiled
freedom boundless
Happy Independence Day to all my Fellow Countrymen!

Elusive indeed! Nicely done, Indieshe ππ
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Happy Independence Day, Sujata. Well done! π
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Thank you ππ
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I love your alliteration! Great poem, Indishe! π
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Thank you so much π
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I like the paradoxical ideas in this poem Sujata. Well-penned.
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Thank you π
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thatβs what I was going to say too β this poem wins the prize for cleverness! π
well done, Sujata!
~David
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Thanks a lot DavidβΊοΈ
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Have a joyous celebration.
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Thanksπ³πͺ
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Wow, I love your poem, Sujata. Great job!
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Thanks Gwen,π
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