

I have attempted a Crown Cinquain
Resurrected Love
two hearts
beating as one
embalmed in golden bliss
sails through love's stormy travails
smoothly
spinning
dreamy tendrils
twining gentle phantasms
of eternal love's fragrant bloom
in peace
thunder
roared to smash hearts
into small smithereens
true love stood tall and tenacious
shining
true love's
reticent twirl
waltzed with strange steadfast rhythm
unperturbed by adversities
of Fate
passion
resurrected
from rushed human hustle
holding onto broken pieces
now one
Wow! This was a great crown cinquain, Sujata. I’m glad you’re back. Feel better soon. ❤
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Thanks a lot Colleen ❤️
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“holding onto broken pieces/now one”… Love this! 🙂
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Thanks a lot💕
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Lovely thoughts… so well articulated!
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Thank you 😊💖
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This is just beautiful 💜
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Thank you 💟😊💖
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You’ve crafted a beautiful story, Sujata. Well done!
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Thank you 😌💖
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