I have invented the form Qelegy.It is an elegy of sequence of quatrains. I have used rhyming scheme ABAB with 4,8,8,4 syllables in four lines of each stanza.
An Elegy to Peace
dark is the night veiled in misty nebulous glow faraway stars hide in sheer fright as canons blow
fireball in sky roared with incendiary blasts to suck out life of souls on sly I watched aghast
wintery snow scarlet red laced with bloody wails life struck a deathblow telling sad tale
much Pain abounds life I so loved and lived no more my dear ones no longer around, Peace I implore
This is a stunning form, the Qelegy is brilliant. Your verse and words touch my heart. We all feel this pain for Ukraine. β€
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Yes indeed !
So much loss of life and pain!
May peace return !
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Absolute truth Sujata. All we can do is pray. β€
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Oh, just fantastic. I love the form and your heartfelt words ππ
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Thanks you π
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This is so beautiful and clever πΊπ¦π¬π§ππ
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Wow! This is powerful. Well done! π
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Wow excellent lines ! Beautiful words thank for sharing ππππ
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Beautiful and moving. The world suffers for Ukraine.
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Yes indeed!
May Peace return!
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I think this Qelegy is a keeper. Love the rhythm and rhyme sequence. How creative.
Peace, only peace, we implore. Thanks for sharing. xo
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Thanks you πβΊοΈ
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Sujata, does it have to have 4 stanzas? or any amount? I love the idea of an elegy!
-David
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Any no of stanzas in a quatrain
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