#TankaTuesday Weekly Poetry Challenge: #Poet’s choice

I have written a sequence of Lanturne. It is a verse of 5 lines shaped like a Japanese
lantern with a syllabic pattern of 1/2/3/4/1.

hope’s
tiny
grains gleam to
paint rhapsody
rhythm

Shapes
of life’s
deep beauty-
a euphony
gleams

shades
merge in
harmony-
life’s palette
one

Jeff Flesch November 6, 202110:33 am Reply

Very nice. ☺️

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1. indishe November 6, 202112:19 pm Reply
  
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judeitakali November 6, 20214:57 pm Reply

Beautiful poem with a beautiful form.

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Goff James November 6, 20217:08 pm Reply

Beautifully penned and great imagery.

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1. indishe November 6, 20217:11 pm Reply
  
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  1. Goff James November 6, 20217:15 pm
    
    Pleasure. Have a great day.
    
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Colleen M. Chesebro November 7, 202110:23 pm Reply

How beautiful. I love shape poetry. Our cinquains fall into this category as well. ❤

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1. indishe November 7, 202110:56 pm Reply
  
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