I have used English quintain rhyme scheme of ABABB
Pieces
Life may fall to pieces,
Scene when curtains fall,
Creased pages that chronicle your life’s thesis
Tell a tale of downfall,
And none to enthrall.
Life’s lesson in a guise,
Little joys unnamed,
Laugh at the darkness before the bright sunrise
Spreading a cheer untamed,
Firing dreams unchained.
Life lets salty tears dance,
Swirled in its whirlwind,
Mired with its dust, sadness leaves you in a trance
Hope surges you unpinned,
Life’s joys unchagrined.
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This is brilliant! I like the end rhymes you chose. They add a lovely rhythm to your poem. Bravo for using such a difficult end rhyme, as well. ❤
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Thanks for your appreciation.
Means a lot!
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Well deserved! Some of these end rhymes are difficult. You mastered this one with ease. ❤
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Thanks
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