NaPoWriMo 2021#Saddle Up Saloon; Colleen’s Double Ennead Challenge No. 3

I have used English quintain rhyme scheme of ABABB

Pieces

Life may fall to pieces,

Scene when curtains fall,

Creased pages that chronicle your life’s thesis

Tell a tale of downfall,

And none to enthrall.

Life’s lesson in a guise,

Little joys unnamed,

Laugh at the darkness before the bright sunrise

Spreading a cheer untamed,

Firing dreams unchained.

Life lets salty tears dance,

Swirled in its whirlwind,

Mired with its dust, sadness leaves you in a trance

Hope surges you unpinned,

Life’s joys unchagrined.

5 thoughts on “NaPoWriMo 2021#Saddle Up Saloon; Colleen’s Double Ennead Challenge No. 3”

Colleen M. Chesebro April 21, 202110:24 pm Reply

This is brilliant! I like the end rhymes you chose. They add a lovely rhythm to your poem. Bravo for using such a difficult end rhyme, as well. ❤

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1. indishe April 21, 202110:36 pm Reply
  
  Thanks for your appreciation.
  Means a lot!
  
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  1. Colleen M. Chesebro April 21, 202110:47 pm
    
    Well deserved! Some of these end rhymes are difficult. You mastered this one with ease. ❤
    
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  2. indishe April 21, 202111:20 pm
    
    Thanks
    
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Saddle Up Saloon Double Ennead Challenge No. 3, Recap | Colleen M. Chesebro May 15, 20219:33 am Reply

[…] "Pieces" (English quintain rhyme scheme of ABABB) Life may fall to pieces, Scene when curtains fall, Creased pages that chronicle your life’s thesis Tell a tale of downfall, And none to enthrall. Life’s lesson in a guise, Little joys unnamed, Laugh at the darkness before the bright sunrise Spreading a cheer untamed, Firing dreams unchained. Life lets salty tears dance, Swirled in its whirlwind, Mired with its dust, sadness leaves you in a trance Hope surges you unpinned, Life’s joys unchagrined. ©TheIndieShe […]

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