“This week, Jude chose the words for synonyms: Search & Lost.”
I have written an Abhanga and my synonyms are Quest and Adrift.
A soul adrift and lost
dreams dear now gone awry
tides turn to terrify
inane fears jest.
An enigmatic quest
I walk to find a niche
all life’s pretence I ditch
to rest in peace.
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Via: Tanka Tuesday
This is lovely. I do like the abhanga – only came across it here.
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Thanks.
It is a new form
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I love the Abhanga, too. It’s an Indian form: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abhang and https://poetscollective.org/poetryforms/abhanga/. I think you’ve mastered it well. I especially like the end rhymes. Well done! ❤
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Thank you😊
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