Saddle Up Saloon; Colleen’s Double Ennead Challenge No. 2

“SPRING”

Pristine snow spring melted,

Now a bubbly froth,

A Cerulean cascade down lush valleys,

Pebbled symphonic waltz,

A welcome deluge.
Arid lands guzzled dry,

Pure manna sullied,

And guillotined by man’s endless avarice,

A limping stagnant slush,

Meeting Mother Sea.
Lost in wide blue chiasm,

Defiled drops looked up,

Warmed under the blue canopy of white clouds,

They Rose to be purged clean,

Elutriated.

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5 thoughts on “Saddle Up Saloon; Colleen’s Double Ennead Challenge No. 2”

  1. Wow! This is filled with amazing imagery. “…Lost in wide blue chiasm…” Your word choice is perfect: “Elutriated” was a new word for me. It means to wash clean. This is what I’m always talking about… finding the perfect word to fit the syllable count. Excellent. ❤

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  2. […] “SPRING” Pristine snow spring melted, Now a bubbly froth, A Cerulean cascade down lush valleys, Pebbled symphonic waltz, A welcome deluge. Arid lands guzzled dry, Pure manna sullied, And guillotined by man’s endless avarice, A limping stagnant slush, Meeting Mother Sea Lost in wide blue chiasm, Defiled drops looked up, Warmed under the blue canopy of white clouds, They Rose to be purged clean, Elutriated. The IndieShe […]

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