My synonyms for Eager and Hope are ardent and wish.
I have attempted an Abhanga.
Lonely soul in a crowd
a melancholic laugh
caged in social carafe
heart lost its rhythm.
Not forgetting to live
but nursing a dear wish
spouting an ardent swish
to fulfil dreams.
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Well done! Those rhymes make your Abhanga interesting, I think. I like the phrase: “caged in a social carafe…” It feels like that sometimes. LOL! ❤
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I’, a day late…
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THE “TANK YOUS” ARE ALL MINE! 😀
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Beautiful brace of Abhanga
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