In the flames( an Abhanga)
Deep Red Burning embers
sizzle me to the core
stoking dead sparks to fore
as numb soul melts.
Those Melting icicles
dousing the fiery flame
that crackles to proclaim
bright life again.
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Via : https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2021/02/02/tanka-tuesday-poetry-challenge-no-211-abhanga-or-poetschoice/
This is really, really good. In eight lines you created magic. Well done.
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Thanks a lot for sharing
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Beautiful pair of Abhanga. Loved the message
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Thanks a lot for appreciating the thought
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I really like this. I have to say the more of these I read, the more I like it.
Pat
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Thanks!
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Well done and a great message. Love it! ❤
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Thank you so much!
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